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    "It's My First Time"

    Finally i can make some colored page \ (^o^) /

    Negi's Tournament
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    Keima's Mother
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    Kusunoki's Conquest
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    Asakura's pactio
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    This is the first time i do the coloring so please give opinion about it

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    For a second there, I thought you were making an inappropriate reference to something...
    Anyways... They look good; I'm sure with some tweaks and changes here and there, they will be perfect. Well, that's my opinion. I'm not sure how others regard this as.
    Face the WIND

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    The last image of Asakura's pactio is by far the best portrayal of technical skill. The blending is better, shading has a much more natural effect, the work overall is smoothly done. The other ones don't have that same attention to detail, and don't feel as natural.

    For the first image, I'd recommend either make the outline more bold like in the last one or completely replacing the gray lines with color. There are quite a few white spaces especially in the hair that if filled in would greatly improve the quality. Also, I would recommend removing the color from the whites of the eyes.

    Same for the second image. If the off color lines stay in, make them more bold or replace them with a color. If you choose the later, I would recommend a darker color than the surrounding if you're working with detail such as the shape to the hair. I would also recommend additional shading with slight gradients to give it a more natural feel.

    The third image has a nice feel to it, but the background tones overpower the foreground. I'd recommend using slightly darker pigmentation for the third image especially with the hair and lighten the background slightly.

    The fourth image is excellent. The attention to detail and the shading work is top notch. The only thing I would recommend is slightly lightening the overall tone to the image.
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    Quote Originally Posted by cyborg-kurochan View Post
    Finally i can make some colored page \ (^o^) /

    Negi's Tournament
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    Keima's Mother
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    Kusunoki's Conquest
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    Asakura's pactio
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    This is the first time i do the coloring so please give opinion about it

    Thanks
    The thread name remind me to some anime. But it's good.
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    This thread reminded me of where Chihiro thought that Keima was about to give her her first kiss, when it was actually the second.
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    Nice, I hope you can teach me! I will call you senpai!!! How can you do that???

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    1st and 2nd pic have some missing details on the hair area but nevertheless job well done
    3rd and 4th are perfect.
    good on you

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    Everyone, Thank you for your Advice. And once again please give me your opinion on this



    Is it BETTER or WORSE ?

    Once again "Thank You" for your Comment

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    *fallen off the chair*
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    Quote Originally Posted by cyborg-kurochan View Post
    Everyone, Thank you for your Advice. And once again please give me your opinion on this



    Is it BETTER or WORSE ?

    Once again "Thank You" for your Comment
    This is exactly the scene I was thinking of. =P

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    it's great!
    The Neko Picture Below is Hiding Something -- I wonder what it is...

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    Quote Originally Posted by cyborg-kurochan View Post
    Finally i can make some colored page \ (^o^) /

    Asakura's pactio
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    This is the first time i do the coloring so please give opinion about it

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    I rather like this piece and am interested in how you got that smooth and natural appearance.

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    Quote Originally Posted by cyborg-kurochan View Post
    Finally i can make some colored page \ (^o^) /

    Negi's Tournament
    Spoiler


    Keima's Mother
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    Kusunoki's Conquest
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    Asakura's pactio
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    This is the first time i do the coloring so please give opinion about it

    Thanks
    Love to give you a thank but since the thank button gone. I will kiss you instead.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dirna View Post
    I rather like this piece and am interested in how you got that smooth and natural appearance.
    I would like to know that myself since when i tried that again it didn't have the same result

    Thanks for everyone thought and comment for my picture

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